Top Hat & Tails (Part 1)

Thorn & Laura (Elle) (‘L’.)

‘So, what’s happening with the apartment hunt?’ Thorn asked as he smoothed cold cream into her skin, her sore bottom aching unbearably where he had spanked and caned her earlier, she wriggled and mewled a little as his hands started building a different kind of heat in her, his fingers traced the beautiful run of cane welts across her cheeks and the tops of her thighs. He smiled to himself as he worked his way along the deep red imprints massaging the cold cream into them. She sucked a breath in at the sting but then sighed, delighting in the sensations his fingers were creating.

He tapped her bottom sharply once. ‘You haven’t answered me.’

She sighed, she didn’t want to speak, she just wanted to stay in the moment.

‘I’m still looking, I can’t afford to stay at the hotel indefinitely, I had enough money put by that I could afford to pay for a month but that’s up at the end of the week and I’m still no closer to finding anywhere that is even remotely affordable.’ Most of Laura’s comment was mumbled into the pillow her face was burrowing into as she sank even deeper into the feelings his touch was creating inside her.

He let his fingers drift down between her thighs, trailing lazily over her slick sex. Her hips lifted, raising her bottom slightly giving him free access. She was hungry for his touch. He spanked her once on each cheek and she yelped.

‘I say when, not you.’ He chuckled, as she gave him huge sad eyes and pouty lips over her shoulder.

He ignored her blatant attempt to sway him and continued speaking, ‘You know you can take this apartment over. All you have to do is say yes and it’s yours.’ He kept his tone neutral, careful not to tread on her pride.

She shook her head, ‘I still want to try and do this on my own, you know I appreciate the offer but I have to try. I’ve got a week to turn something up. Although based on this week I’m not sure I’m going to have much success anyway. Everything I’ve looked at so far has either been a complete dive or so many people were fighting for it I didn’t stand a chance. I’m something like 100th on the list for one tiny flat that’s little more than a bedsit, and its so expensive!’ She mumbled, defeated by the weight of her problem.

Thorn’s jaw tensed but he refrained from bulldozing her into agreeing with him. He leaned back against the headboard and turning her over, pulled her up onto his chest, locking her against him. ‘Listen to me,’ he said gently, ‘if you are out of options by the end of the week, we shall move you in here and you can continue to look while you live here. At least I will know you’re in a safe place and it gives me easy access to you whenever I finish work.’ He continued to stroke her softly along her sex, sending delicious shivers through her at his featherlight touch.

Greed was nipping at her, she wanted more and she allowed her legs to fall open exposing herself to the possibility. She turned her face against his chest and captured his nipple between her teeth, suckling on it, nipping it, feeling it harden at the attention. His chuckle rumbled through his chest and jostled her a little, dislodging her from her prize, she returned to it sucking it back in between her lips anchoring her teeth gently around it. His fingers responded to the pinch of his nipple by smacking her pussy lips once, hard.

‘ Be careful Elle, you’re asking for trouble baby.’ He murmured. She released his nipple and pouted at him. Distracting him from his darker urges she continued their conversation.

‘It’s not that I don’t want to live here you know, I’ve already said as much, but we haven’t been together very long, I need to take things more slowly, not rush headlong into everything so wilfully. Besides, I’m not willing to move in here while you won’t charge me rent. I want to pay my own way.’ She was adamant about this aspect of his offer. It was a top class apartment situated over his club and she knew he could easily charge a top flight rent for it.

He sighed, ‘If it means that much to you I’ll charge you a peppercorn rent, give you a contract, make it an official let between us. It’s not completely altruistic on my part either. I gain a lot from having you move in here. ‘ His deep voice rumbled through her and she felt an answering vibration deep inside her as he continued, ‘I want to spend more time with you but with the hours I keep, its making it difficult. If you’re here above the club, we both get what we want.’ His fingers stroked her pussy lips, dipping his finger and swirling it against her clit only to withdraw when she reacted to it.

She nodded, thinking, and as she thought she latched on to his nipple again, nipping it between her teeth, revelling in the sharp intake of breath from him as the hard nub swelled against her lips.

She mumbled around it, ‘give me a week and then I will agree if I haven’t found somewhere.’ She nipped him again and suckled to sooth the bite. Too late.

‘I warned you…’ He growled.

Yelping at the sudden sharp pain between her thighs where he was now spanking her hard with his finger tips, she let go of his nipple. She glared up at him in frustration, only to swallow her reprimand when she saw his face. His eyes had darkened, he was her Sir now not Thorn her lover.

‘You want some attention for pussy? Is that what all this is about?’ He snarled in a dangerously low tone.

She nodded mutely. She didn’t trust her mouth to keep her out of trouble. He had been like this with her more and more recently and while she loved the switches in his moods, this one always caused her to suddenly become compliant, even while she struggled to call him Sir.

His smile was darkly intense. ‘ Ask me, properly. Tell me what it is you think you want for pussy and why you should have it.’

Laura’s mind froze. He knew she struggled to articulate what she wanted sexually from him. He knew it embarrassed her to verbalise her desires.

‘I’m waiting Elle.’ he murmured, using his pet name for her. She loved it when he shortened her name to just the sound of her initial. It made her sound like someone else. Someone beautiful, someone confident in her sexual allure for him. Someone special. She smiled against his chest loving the feeling of his fingers pressing against her clit, rolling it gently then pinching it, much the same as she had done to his nipple until she was sucking in a sharp breath, releasing it on a moan as the heat rose swiftly inside her.

‘I want to feel you inside me Thorn, I want you to fuck me hard and make me scream your name when I cum… I mean… um… when you tell me I can cum, … when you let…’ She stammered over the words and he chuckled.

‘Try again baby, that was almost clear…’ his fingers continued their onslaught of her clit and her hips rolled to absorb the sharp sensations more fully.

‘I want your cock buried inside me, all of it, until it hurts! I want you to fuck me long and slow until I beg you to let me cum, until I scream your name and beg for my release.’ Laura stopped short of shouting the words at him. Her clit had thrummed painfully to life and was sending hot messages to her brain, she struggled to focus on anything other than those messages, her juices flowed over his fingers as he played at the edge of her soaked pussy, teasing her, taunting her drawing long low moans from her as if she was an instrument to be played. Her frustration ramped up and his fingers slowed down.

‘Say it again Elle, this time remember to look at me and address me correctly.’ He spanked her pussy lips sharply twice and she cried out at the immediate throbbing heat that bloomed there.

She locked eyes with him, ‘I want your cock buried inside me, all of it, until it hurts! I want you to fuck me until I beg you to let me cum, until I scream your name and beg for my release…SIR!!’ She sobbed out the last word breaking away from his intense gaze. He removed his hand from her sex and cupped her chin between thumb and finger, forcing her to look up at him.

‘See that wasn’t so difficult was it baby?’ He smiled a dark little smile at her as he swiftly lifted her off his lap and forcing her face down on the bed, he positioned her on her knees, legs spread wide revealing her dripping sex to him. He kept his hand between her shoulder blades to keep her from raising up. Without pause he thrust his engorged cock deep inside her until there was no space between their two bodies, his other hand snaking around her hip and between her thighs, his fingers finding and pinching her clit again. she cried out in pain as he stretched her wide beyond her natural limits, moving slowly, withdrawing almost to the tip before plunging fully inside her once more, the pain ripping through her pussy walls spinning her mind around, causing her to release a feral scream in answer to his probing fingers and the rigid pounding of his cock.

Her pussy flooded juices over him and coated him with all the lubrication he needed. She sobbed into the pillow he had pushed her face into, and pushed her hips back on to him for more. Hungry for him, hungry for the intense pain that she had learned he could turn into even more intense pleasure. She bucked wildly and howled when his fingers left her clit and entered her ass as he filled her pussy with his cock and he plunged inside both holes, faster and harder now, his pace pushing her deeper into submission to him. She sobbed incoherently with the pressure that was building inside her, she wanted to cum, desperately needed to cum, right now! He knew the instant she was on the edge, he felt her pussy walls contracting heavily around his cock, she couldn’t stop his thrust, he was too big for her, she could only massage his throbbing member, using the ridges of it to stimulate her already over sensitised walls. She was tumbling over, her body began to tremble. He stopped thrusting, spanking her bottom hard on each cheek, ‘don’t you dare cum Elle, push it back. Control it.’ He began to thrust slowly again, his fingers once again working inside her ass applying pressure to the nerve endings there sending her spinning with need.

‘Please Thorn, please let me cum! Please…. ‘ she begged on a sob, as she once again pushed back against him and forced down the need to sink into her desire and let go of the painful tightness deep inside her pussy walls.

‘Who am I Elle?’ He demanded as he thrust harder and faster, leaning over her back removing his hand from between her shoulders to slip around her neck, holding her loosely by the throat, lifting her face up off the pillow, forcing her backwards, creating a beautiful concave arc in her posture, she gasped as he seemed to sink deeper into her. ‘Oh fuck… please Sir, please let me cum… I can’t hold it back… please Sir…’ She begged, tears streaming down her face as she tried to push herself up against him.

He grinned a sadistic satisfied smile as he whispered, ‘Now you can cum for me Elle.’

It was all she needed, she relaxed her tensed body and let her orgasm rip through her on a tidal wave of sensations. He joined her, thrusting faster, gripping her hips tightly, pulling her onto his pulsing heavy cock until he growled deep and low and released his seed in a hot rush deep inside her. His heat seared her and she shuddered and sank into a second heavier orgasm fuelled by his release. Her body trembling against him as he relaxed his hold on her and rolled them both on to their sides, pulling her into him he soothed her, brushing her tangled hair from her face, placing kisses along her neck and jaw line. tasting the saltiness of her tears given to him freely in her submission to him. His dark eyes glinted with even darker lust as he claimed his prize. They were his.

Still he remained inside her, semi hard and in no rush to relinquish her warmth yet. His primal urge to own her, claim her, control her to full submission was still driving him and he continued to thrust slowly. She felt her pussy contract against his thrusts and she massaged him inside her. The pace picked up slowly, moving towards another battle of submission, a relinquishing of her power to him given willingly. He growled and she answered with her body.

It was a long time later before they slept, exhausted, wrapped up in each other, breathing as one body. Completely satiated…for now at least.

Published by gemstrong63

So, One blog year later, I've been spanked, hard! I have spanked myself almost as hard, I have spanked others even harder. I'm now heading for a different road, one that still includes all the best bits of me, all the naughty bits, all the spanking bits, all the hot steamy bits, and I'm creating characters to play out my delightful erotic fantasies, I hope you enjoy the new ride as much as the previous one…

23 thoughts on “Top Hat & Tails (Part 1)

    1. Mmmm, glad you liked it Dave! πŸ’‹ It’s just a taste of what’s to come. These two are red hot and burning an erotic trail through my creative mind right now. I can’t type fast enough to keep up with them. There is, as always, a deeper story to be told but it is going to be very much based around her new found sexual freedom and desire to explore the depth of her kinks, and who better to do that with than a man who’s whole purpose in life to date, has been about providing the best kind of playground for those kinks and much more besides.


      Liked by 3 people

  1. Wow. Again I make the mistake and read this incredibly hot story in the morning at the office.
    I will have to ask Pia, my assistant to help me through the day.
    The design of your site has changed very pleasantly and stylishly. I love it. It is clear and concise. The color is also very pleasant.
    Thanks Gemma, I will have to tell Pia about you. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

  2. Why thank you kind sir! I think Pia may have her hands full with you during this new series! It will only get hotter, that much I can promise. These two characters fire my brain in such an erotic and deeply kinky way I’m making copious amounts of notes about them constantly just trying to keep up with their exploration of Laura’s kinky depths. Thorn is a man on a mission so to speak!
    I’m so happy you noticed the design had changed. I hadn’t done anything with the front page since I started the Journals so it was still loaded with old colour photos. I do love the monochrome against the dark grey backdrop. and the contrast of the pale jade. It gives a much more adult feel to the site.
    I would be delighted if you told Pia about me!
    I think she should read some posts about sound spankings Christian, not to mention a few good canings too! You could end up regretting that suggestion, there are lots of ideas in those posts for you to end up with a very red bottom!
    Do let me know if she does read some, I would love to hear what she thinks, and I would be delighted if you received a sound spanking because of something I had written! πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜

    Liked by 3 people

      1. I would love to hear your own story more fully one day Christian, I think you probably have a wicked story to tell! Feel free to email me if you ever want to my lovely, I would welcome a proper conversation with you! πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜

        Liked by 2 people

  3. Oh … fine and slow story, no need to hurry …
    Let the audience think. Stop their own time …
    Settle on the platform section in a train. And the Platonic flora ruffles Plato’s nerves … πŸ™‚
    It have time to flirt … Oh, how delicious to listen πŸ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Always happy to provide some hot characters Nora, these two are driving me a little bit nuts to be honest, they are bouncing around inside my head almost constantly at the moment! It’s a relief to actually write it down and make some room in there! πŸ˜€ xxx

      Liked by 2 people

  4. Well young lady, I hope you are satisfied…I am fully spent! πŸ†πŸ’¦πŸ’¦ I love the way your mind works and how you got into both their minds, exposing and then pushing on their erotic hot buttons. I found myself easing into this erotic scene and increasingly adjusting my slacks until I had to just take them off and give this a proper reading. 😈πŸ”₯ Thanks so for sending me off to dreamland fully satisfied ☺️😘

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Mmm exactly what I require from you Michael. You know I adore your tributes, a very hot way to end a busy day darling man not to mention wonderful imagery for this girl’s imagination to feed on. πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ˜ˆπŸ’«

      Liked by 1 person

    1. Ahh but the best part about desire that burns this brightly means that whoever attempts to tame it catches fire too. That’s a flame one should never try to tame… Thank you for the compliment and comment! Appreciated. x

      Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

.*β™₯**β™₯*β˜… *β™₯*..*β™₯*. BERNARD *β™₯**β™₯*β˜… *β™₯*..*β™₯*.

β™₯β™₯ β™₯β™₯ MES PLUS BEAUX BISOUS D'AMITIES A VOUS β™₯β™₯ β™₯β™₯

The Wolf in the Night Sky

A Blogspace for a Daddy Dom


When it's in your head, it's blogable

Erotic Fiction Deluxe

The hottest stories by you and for you

Molly's Daily Kiss

A Kiss is Just a Kiss -

Corrupting Mrs Jones

Often unfiltered thoughts.


"And the day came when the risk it took to remain tight inside the bud was more painful than the risk it took to blossom.." -Anais Nin

Patti's Stories

f/f spanking stories/ 18 and above

Kdaddy23's Blog

It's about what's in my head

Traditionally Applied

Old-fashioned Discipline


--------Lead me not into temptation, I can find my own way-------- This is a phone friendly blog, tap on the menu above for the blog roll and other useful links

words and music and stories

Let's recollect our emotions in tranquillity

A Lost Dom

This blog chronicles my unlikely entrance into the world of BDSM. Here I’ll share my story, the things I’ve learned, and the things I wish I had learned sooner. It’s also the place I will come to think out loud about where I go from here.

Collared Michael's Chastity Blog

Just another WordPress site

Seductress Of Words

The finest filth

The Fire Down Below

Sensual, Thoughtful, and Very Naughty

The Enchanted River in the Cryptid's Hollow

Just a wordpress blog for books


This is a story about an affair, a marriage, divorce. It is about sex, love and ultimate heartbreak.


Some bitter. Some sweet. Some naughty. Some nice

Creations by Michael

Some of my writings are NSFW. Fair warning. I write about my life, my love and the things that interest me. Please feel free to comment, ask questions or simply agree or disagree with my points of view. They are welcome. Thank you for reading.

Erotic Musings, Poetry, and Social Commentary

Thoughts, writings, social commentary, and some photography by David Mei. Warning intended for an adult audience if you are not the age of majority where you live, leave now.

A Munky on Merseyside

Funkiest Munky there ever was

Gemma - Journey of Self discovery

So, I've been spanked, hard! I have spanked myself hard, I have spanked others even harder! I'm now heading for a different road, one that still includes all the best bits of me, all the naughty bits, all the hot steamy bits, and plenty of spanking still to be had! But this time I'm creating characters to play out my delightful erotic fantasies, I hope you enjoy the new ride as much as the previous one...

Life of a Kinky Wife

Marriage with a Twist

E J Frost

Love in the Margins

Rope & Roses

- A Journey of a Kinky Nature! Adult Content

Jaye Peaches

Enticingly kinky - BDSM Erotic Romance

Flicker of Thoughts

Love to write!

The Poet's Love Letter

Expressions of love and hope

Finding Strength in my Submission

Sharing my authentic self (for mature audiences only, NSFW)

Nude Alexis

My Journey To Experience The Naked Life


4 out of 5 dentists recommend this site

Liz BlackX

Author of Anything Erotic

Succulent Savage Says...

Tales from a collared babygirl

Erica Scott: Life, Love and Spanking

Ruminations, opinionated observations, darkly humorous blathering and the occasional rant from an outspoken spanko and unapologetic attention wh--, um, hog.

A Submissive Wife

Exploring Kink as a Monogamous Married Couple

slave shae

My Submissive Journey in a Life of D/s Slavery


Alles dat je ooit wilde weten over billenkoek...

Pandora Spocks

Author of Erotic Romance

%d bloggers like this: